How appropriate is my
pace?
A: It is a good pace but slightly
slow, might disengage listeners if it is targeting for a younger audience.
B: In general, I think your pace
was appropriate, but not entirely so, because I felt that the beginning reading
of the script had more than 3 words a second. However, towards the end, your
pace slowed down to almost match the 3 words a second rule.
How appropriate is my
tone for the news being presented?
A: Your tone is good, you do not
sound monotone, and rather you sound passionate about what you are talking
about
B: I think your tone was
appropriate for the news being presented, as the news that you presented
surrounded knife crime and your tone was serious, which enabled you to suit the
tone of the story.
Would you stop and
listen to my story? Why?
A: Yes I would because knife crime
is an important issue in every society and is newsworthy.
B: Yes I would stop and listen
to your story, because I as a teenager living in London also feel strongly
about knife crime in London, so there is proximity.
What are the best
points or what do you like about my report?
A: The best point about your report
is stating that knife crime is on the rise. This makes it more reliable
B: I like the fact that you
included the problem of knife crime, but you also included organizations that
aim to tackle knife crime in your report, thus this balances out your report
and gives listeners and idea where they can go to if they also feel strongly about
knife crime.
What improvements
could be made on my report?
A: You could just improve by
speeding up the pace, other than that everything is perfect!
B: I believe that, on the whole
your report was great, but I would suggest you practice more to meet the 3
words a second rule.
Response A
Response B
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